ext_27774 ([identity profile] tavalya-ra.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] neoyi 2007-01-24 11:39 pm (UTC)

Interesting to see Vlad in a position of weakness. (In my own play with his character, he doesn't deal well.) And I like how clear it is that GW/Charlie and Angel just don't think like other people do.

“…Oh. Okay…Ummm…I like art, too. The sex part…uhh…well, I’ve probably never had it as much as you did.” He spoke with flustered cheeks.

HAHAHA! I suspect Vlad would die from exhaustion if he had! (I'm not doubting the powerhouse in his pants, I just think Charlie's probably that great of a slut.)

“Well, the first one accidentally got hit by a car, so she’s currently comatose, the second when mentally insane when I took her to the circus (I didn’t know till then how fearful she was of people on stilts), the third had a sex change (and my father wanted a future heir, so that was bust), the fourth refused to marry me, rebelled, and ran away, the fifth suffered narcolepsy so on our trip to Paris, when I told her not to stay on the edge of the Eiffel Tower she…well…she’ll be sorely missed, and the sixth…she just lost contact with me years ago.”

With a track record like that, wonder why number four bailed!

“Her…body, how superficial...and pigheaded.” Vlad scoffed.

You've got guts to say that too a god. Oh, and grammar point, Neo: since it's dialogue, that first period needs to be a comma.

Please, art isn’t always about that, art can be whatever the shit you want it to be, even if it’s the most blatant and obvious. But I’m getting off the subject…hey, think you can make me some coffee?”

Hahaha, that's great!

“I know how to make coffee.” He sneered as he proceeded to the kitchen “…Continue.”

Random, but the first time I read this sentence, I misread "continue" as "concubine." :D

“No, BEFORE, in the middle!”

It's one of the lists! (Stunningly, the Crack has no lists.)

so, in the end, we settled for being good friends...with benefits, heh heh.”

You know, I just want to smack him. Really. Give him a good thwap.

Despite the casual, almost careless tone he sounded with, Charlie’s face hinted a sense of sadness as his eyebrows creased and his mouth suffered a small frown, covered by the coffee mug.

Nice try, but I still want to smack him.

Angel’s done gender changes in between

Depending on what's happening, wouldn't that have the potential to cut off Charlie's penis? XD (The thought makes me kinda happy. I don't like this guy.)

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